Breakout Under Fire

Commander Martin Dashiel stood at the forward rail of the Evelna’s bridge, hands clasped behind his back, eyes fixed on the swirling horizon of the Infinite Plains. Even after years of service, the transition still made his skin prickle — the way reality folded, the way the ship hummed like a living heart preparing to breathe again.

He had grown up on Xiso, on a farm carved into the red‑brown soil of the southern plains. Hard work had been his first language. Dawn meant irrigation lines, midday meant tending the herds, and night meant collapsing into bed with the kind of exhaustion that felt honest. He had always assumed he would return to that life when his service ended. Maybe he still would.

But the war had changed everything.

He’d been trained to fight since childhood — every Ixanian was — but Dashiel had seen more than most. Brutal planetside battles in the early years of the conflict had carved him into something sharper, harder. He’d risen fast, too fast, some said. Twenty‑four and already a commander. But the battlefield didn’t care about age. Only survival.

Serving aboard the Evelna felt like stepping into legend.

Captain Jo’su Orión was a name whispered with reverence across the fleet, and the ship herself — powered by the Nexus of the Adored One — was more myth than metal.

The first time Dashiel met Orión, something had clicked deep in his chest. A familiarity he couldn’t explain. And the way the captain had looked at him — not with curiosity, but recognition — had left Dashiel uneasy ever since. As if Orión knew something about him that Dashiel himself did not.

Those thoughts evaporated as the Infinite Plains peeled away and the Evel’na phased back into realspace.

A star system snapped into view, cold and distant. They were still a few lightyears from Jael’Pre, but close enough to see the faint glimmer of ships on long‑range sensors.

“Stealth mode,” Dashiel ordered immediately. “Shields at full. Keep our signature low.”

The bridge crew moved with crisp precision. Lights dimmed. The hum of the engines shifted to a quieter, predatory thrum.

“Multiple support vessels around Jael’Pre,” the sensor officer reported. “But—”

Dashiel’s stomach tightened.

The silhouette appeared on the holo‑display like a jagged wound.

“The Ghra’kul,” he muttered. “Damn it.”

Captain Orión strode to the front of the bridge, his presence commanding without effort. He gestured Dashiel closer, and a cluster of tactical specs floated between them — ship positions, energy signatures, patrol routes.

“What’s our approach?” Orión asked.

Dashiel studied the data, jaw tight. “We send a small craft with fighter support. Slip in under their sensor net. Board the Ghra’kul covertly and extract the team before they’re moved.”

Orión nodded slowly, considering it.

Before he could respond, the air around them shimmered — a soft, resonant vibration that wasn’t sound so much as sensation.

The Evelna spoke.

Her voice emerged through the holographic display, layered and melodic, like a chorus echoing across time.

“We have been detected.”

Dashiel’s blood ran cold.

“The enemy vessel is altering course,” she continued. “Fighter crafts launching. Attack vector forming.”

Alarms erupted across the bridge. Red lights strobed. Officers snapped into motion, calling out readiness reports.

Orión’s expression hardened. “Battle stations! Power up the batteries!”

Dashiel moved to his console, fingers flying across the controls. The Evelna’s shields flared to life, shimmering like a translucent shell.

Orión glanced at him, eyes sharp with both urgency and something like amusement.

“Commander Dashiel,” he said over the rising noise, “it’s time for Plan B.”

Dashiel blinked. “There’s a Plan B?”

Orión winked. “There always is. I just need to think of it first.”

The bridge shook as the first Nalash fighters closed in.

And Dashiel braced himself — not for the battle, but for whatever impossible plan Jo’su Orión was about to conjure.

The Nalash didn’t bother warming the holding cells.


The air aboard the Ghra’kul was dry, thin, and cold enough to bite exposed skin — a deliberate contrast to the wet, suffocating heat of Jael’Pre’s surface. The Nalash hated humidity, so they kept their prisoners half‑frozen instead. Another tactic. Another pressure point.

Commander Le’nal Tak sat with his back against the wall, breathing slow and controlled despite the bruising across his ribs. His uniform — black field shirt torn at the collar, armored vest cracked along one edge — was stiff with dried blood. Weeks of interrogation had left him gaunt, but his eyes were sharp. Always sharp.

Across from him, Major Nal Damus, stocky and broad‑shouldered, paced the length of the cell like a caged animal. His lip was split, one eye swollen nearly shut, but his mind was working. Nalash language, dialects, command patterns — he’d been listening, absorbing, translating even while they beat him. He was the only reason they knew the ship’s shift rotations, the guard patterns, the fact that the Ghra’kul was headed toward the border.

Corporal Jurs Phel sat on the floor beside the door, arms resting on his knees, jaw clenched. Twenty‑one and built like a transport hauler, he’d taken the worst of the physical punishment simply because he refused to break. He hadn’t said a word to their captors. Not one. The Nalash hated that.

And Sergeant Fio’na Trepel — blood on her knuckles, hair matted, one sleeve torn off — leaned against the far wall, eyes half‑closed but alert. She’d broken a Nalash guard’s arm three days ago before they’d managed to restrain her. Seven martial disciplines, including all three Nalash forms. Beautiful, lethal, calculating. Even exhausted, she radiated danger.

They had been held for weeks on Jael’Pre. Two more aboard the Ghra’kul. And time was running out.

Tak exhaled slowly. “They’ll kill us soon.”

“No,” Damus muttered, still pacing. “Not until they’re certain we didn’t transmit anything. They’re paranoid. They always have been.”

“They should be,” Fio’na said, voice low and rough. “We got what we came for.”

The attack on Arcal. The first strike in a war the Ixanians weren’t ready for.

Tak had to get that intel home. He had to warn the Evelna.

But they’d been intercepted the moment they lifted off from Jael’Pre’s surface. A Nalash patrol cutter had been waiting — too close, too fast. Someone had tipped them off. Or the Nalash had been watching the colony more closely than they realized.

Tak’s jaw tightened. “We’re not dying on this ship.”

Before anyone could answer, the Ghra’kul lurched violently to port.

The lights flickered. A deep alarm bellowed through the corridors — a sound like metal grinding against bone.

Jurs shot to his feet. “That’s weapons fire.”

Damus pressed his ear to the wall. “Starboard hull. Heavy cannons. That’s—”

The ship shook again, harder this time. Dust rained from the ceiling. Somewhere down the corridor, Nalash voices barked orders in their harsh, guttural tongue.

Fio’na’s eyes snapped open, a slow grin spreading across her bruised face.

“The Evelna,” she said.

Tak stood, every muscle screaming but his posture steady. “We’re not waiting for a rescue.”

He stepped toward the cell door, voice low, commanding.

“Prepare to move. We escape on our terms.”


The alarms wailed louder. The Ghra’kul shuddered under another impact. And for the first time in weeks, hope — sharp and dangerous — cut through the cold.

The first Nalash fighters broke formation like shards of obsidian slicing through the void. Their engines burned a harsh, acidic red — a signature of the Ghra’kul’s fleet — and they came in fast, weapons already warming.

“Fighters on intercept vector,” the tactical officer called out. “Eight… no, twelve. More launching.”

The bridge lights dimmed automatically as the Evelna shifted into battle posture. The air vibrated with the hum of charging batteries, a sound Dashiel had grown to love — the sound of a living ship preparing to bare her teeth.

“Shields at full,” Dashiel ordered. “Angle forty‑two degrees starboard. Keep our signature low until they commit.”

The crew moved with flawless discipline. Orión stood at the center of the bridge, hands clasped behind his back, watching the fighters streak toward them like a swarm of angry insects.

The Evelna voice resonated through the holographic display, calm and layered.

“Enemy weapons charging. Impact in twelve seconds.”

Dashiel’s pulse quickened. “Bring the forward batteries online. Target the lead formation.”

“Batteries charged,” the gunnery officer confirmed.

Orión glanced at Dashiel, a faint smile tugging at the corner of his mouth. “Your call, Commander.”

Dashiel didn’t hesitate.

“Fire.”

The Evelna responded instantly.

A brilliant arc of blue‑white energy erupted from the forward cannons, slicing through the void with surgical precision. The beam struck the lead Nalash fighter dead‑center, vaporizing it in a flash of molten metal. The explosion rippled outward, catching two more fighters in the blast.

“Three down!” someone shouted.

The remaining fighters broke formation, scattering like startled birds. Plasma bolts streaked toward the Evelna, slamming into her shields with a thunderous crackle.

“Shields holding at ninety‑four percent,” the officer reported.

Dashiel gripped the rail, leaning forward. “Rotate port batteries. Track their evasive pattern.”

The Evelna voice chimed again, almost amused.

“Pattern tracked. Firing solution ready.”

“Take it,” Dashiel said.

The port batteries unleashed a rapid‑fire barrage — smaller, faster bursts of energy designed for anti‑fighter combat. The shots curved mid‑flight, guided by the ship’s predictive targeting. Two more fighters exploded. A third spiraled out of control, slamming into its wingmate.

Orión nodded approvingly. “They weren’t expecting us to bite this hard.”

Dashiel’s eyes narrowed at the tactical display. “They will now.”

A deep alarm pulsed through the bridge — lower, heavier than the fighter alert.

“New contact!” the sensor officer shouted. “Large signature. Very large.”

The holographic display shifted, revealing the jagged, brutal silhouette of the Ghra’kul emerging from behind Jael’Pre’sshadow. Its hull bristled with weapon ports, and its forward cannons glowed with gathering energy.

Dashiel felt the temperature in the room drop.

“They’re charging their main battery,” he said quietly.

Orión stepped beside him, eyes locked on the monstrous warship. “Then we hit them before they finish.”

The Evelna voice cut through the tension.

“Warning: The Ghra’kul has locked onto us.”

“Evasive pattern Delta‑Nine!” Dashiel barked.

The Evelna dove sharply, engines roaring as she twisted through the void with impossible grace. A massive beam of crimson energy tore past them, missing by meters and lighting up the bridge in a wash of red.

“Return fire!” Orión commanded.

Dashiel slammed his hand onto the console. “All forward batteries — full power!”

The Evelna unleashed everything she had.

A torrent of blue‑white energy lanced across the battlefield, slamming into the Ghra’kul’s shields. The Nalash warship shuddered under the impact, its shields flaring violently.

“Direct hit!” the gunnery officer shouted. “Shields on the Ghra’kul down to sixty‑two percent!”

But the Nalash were already retaliating.

“Brace!” Dashiel yelled.

The Ghra’kul fired a broadside volley — dozens of plasma bolts streaking toward them like a storm of burning meteors. The Evelna twisted, rolled, and dove, but several shots slammed into her shields, rocking the entire ship.

“Shields at seventy‑eight percent,” the officer reported.

Orión steadied himself, eyes bright with battle‑fire. “Dashiel — keep pressure on them. We need to draw their attention.”

Dashiel nodded, adrenaline surging. “Aye, Captain.”

He leaned over the console, voice low and fierce.

Evelna… let’s show them what you can do.”

The ship’s lights pulsed in response — almost like a heartbeat.

“With pleasure, Commander.”

And the Evelna surged forward, diving straight into the jaws of the Ghra’kul.


The holding cells shook violently as another Evelna volley slammed into the Ghra’kulThe greenish energy shield flickered, its hum stuttering for a fraction of a second. Nal Damus stood closest to it, listening to the Nalash guards bark orders on the other side. “They’re panicking,” he whispered. “They’re saying the Evelna’s tearing through their outer batteries. They weren’t ready for her.”

The ship lurched again, harder this time. The lights dimmed. The shield sputtered.

Phel straightened. “That’s twice now.”

Damus’ eyes narrowed. “Three seconds after the volley hits. Out for half a second.”

He tore the rank pips from his collar, ripping off the outer casing with his teeth. The metal pieces were small, sharp, and conductive. He jammed them together into a jagged spike.

Tak stared. “Nal—what are you doing?”

“Making a very stupid decision,” Damus muttered. “Get ready.”

Trepel rose to her feet, eyes locked on him. “If you die, I’m dragging your corpse through this ship myself.”

“Motivating,” Damus said dryly.

The guards shouted again, louder this time. Damus translated under his breath. “They’re calling for reinforcements. They think the Evel’na’s going to breach the hull.”

The ship shook violently, sparks raining from the ceiling. The shield flickered again.

“Wait…” Damus whispered.

Another impact. The shield stuttered.

“Wait…”

A third, massive blast hit the Ghra’kul broadside. The shield dropped for a blink.

“NOW!”

Damus slammed the metal spike into the shield distributor.

The world detonated.

A surge of raw energy blasted through him, lifting him off the ground. His scream was swallowed by the crackling roar of the overloaded system. Sparks erupted from the walls. The shield flared white—

—then blew out in a shower of molten circuitry.

Damus collapsed, smoke rising from his clothes.

The guards froze in shock.

Trepel did not.

She vaulted over Damus’ smoking body and slammed into the nearest guard, driving her knee into his ribs hard enough to crack bone. He swung his rifle, but she caught it, twisted, and smashed the butt into his jaw.

Tak tackled the second guard, slamming him into the wall. The Nalash swung a heavy fist, but Tak ducked under it and drove an elbow into his throat. The guard gagged, stumbling back—right into Phel, who grabbed him by the beard and hurled him to the floor.

The first guard tried to rise. Trepel stomped on his wrist, breaking it clean, then punched him once—hard—and he went limp.

Tak and Phel finished the second guard with brutal efficiency.

Silence fell except for the distant alarms and the rumble of the Evelna assault.

Tak dropped to his knees beside Damus. “NalNal!”

Phel rolled him over.

Damus’ eyes snapped open—wild, unfocused—then he burst into manic laughter. “Oh—oh that hurt. That hurt so much. I wasn’t sure that would work. Or if I’d still be alive to find out.”

Trepel grabbed him by the collar and shoved him back down. “That was fucking reckless,” she snarled, though a smile tugged at her lips. “With all due respect, Major.”

Phel hauled him upright, slinging Damus’ arm over his shoulder. “You’re insane.”

“Still alive,” Damus corrected, waving away the smoke rising from his clothes. “Let’s keep it that way.”

They sprinted into the corridor, boots pounding against the grated floor. The Ghra’kul shook violently again, lights flickering. A Nalash patrol rounded the corner ahead, rifles raised. Plasma bolts scorched the walls, forcing the team to dive behind a support beam.

“I’ve got it,” Trepel growled.

She launched forward, sliding under the incoming fire. She grabbed the nearest Nalash by the ankle, yanked him off his feet, and drove her elbow into his throat before he could scream. Phel barreled into another, slamming him into the wall so hard the metal dented. Tak ducked under a blade swipe, grabbed the attacker’s wrist, twisted until bone cracked, and drove his knee into the Nalash’s gut.

The last guard tried to flee. Trepel caught him by the beard and slammed his face into the wall. He dropped instantly.

Damus pointed to a wall panel. “Here!”

He ripped it open, revealing a narrow service hatch barely wide enough for an Ixanian shoulder.

Phel stared. “You sure we’ll fit?”

“No,” Damus said. “But we’ll fit better than we will into a Nalash body bag.”

Tak didn’t hesitate. “Go!”

Trepel dove in first, crawling into the pitch‑black tunnel. Tak followed, then Phel—who grunted as his broad shoulders scraped the walls—and finally Damus, sealing the panel behind them. The tunnel was hot, cramped, and vibrating with the ship’s wounded engines.

“Try not to break the ship,” Trepel whispered.

“Try not to break me,” Phel muttered.

Damus hissed from ahead. “Quiet. They’re searching the corridor above us.”

They froze as heavy Nalash boots thundered overhead. After a tense minute, Damus whispered, “Here.”

A faint draft brushed Tak’s face—fresh air from the maintenance shaft. One by one they dropped onto the ladder, gripping the cold rungs. The elevator shaft beside them flickered with light, illuminating the dizzying drop below.

Phel looked down and swore. “I hate heights.”

“You`re going to love this then,” Trepel said, climbing past him with ease.

The shaft shook violently as an elevator roared past, nearly knocking them off the ladder. Tak held tight. “Move!”

They crawled through another suffocating tunnel until Damus cracked open a panel and peered out. “Clear. Move.”

They spilled into the corridor, weapons raised. Damus crept to the junction, peeked around the corner, and held up four fingers.

Trepel nodded once. She pulled a cylindrical explosive from her vest, twisted the timer, and lobbed it down the hall.

“GRENADE!” a Nalash soldier screamed.

The explosion tore the corridor apart. Fire and shrapnel blasted past them. Trepel was already moving, flipping into the smoke and firing at anything that twitched.

“Hangar’s open!” she shouted.

They sprinted after her, leaping over twisted metal and charred bodies. The hangar bay was chaos—alarms blaring, lights flashing, smoke pouring from ruptured pipes. Nalash soldiers staggered to their feet, dazed.

Trepel didn’t give them a chance. She cut them down with ruthless precision.

“There!” she yelled, pointing to a compact combat transport.

Tak and Phel ran for it while Trepel covered them. Damus dove inside, sliding into the pilot’s seat and powering up the systems. A side door burst open—a flood of Nalash reinforcements poured into the bay.

“Contact!” Phel shouted, opening fire.

Trepel sprinted across the hangar, firing behind her as she ran. Plasma bolts ricocheted off the transport hull. Tak leaned out, returning fire, shouting, “Move, Fio’na!”

She was halfway there when the shot hit her.

The impact spun her forward, blood spraying across the floor. She collapsed, gasping, clutching her chest.

Trepel!” Tak roared, bolting toward her.

Phel grabbed him, dragging him back behind cover. “Commander—no!”

Trepel coughed blood, shaking her head violently. “No, Le’nal! Go!”

“We’re not leaving you!” Tak shouted, voice cracking.

“You won’t have to,” she rasped.

With a final surge of strength, she pushed herself upright, turned toward the advancing Nalash, and ran straight at them.

“No!” Phel yelled.

Bullets tore into her, ripping through muscle and bone. She staggered but kept moving, hatred burning in her eyes. She pulled another explosive from her pocket, thumbed the trigger, and snarled, “Run from this, bastards.”

The explosion swallowed her—a blinding sphere of fire that vaporized the front line of Nalash troops and shook the entire bay.

Phel flinched, falling backward into the transport. Tak stared in horror, frozen.

Damus shouted, “We have to go NOW!”

Tak forced himself into the copilot seat, jaw trembling. “Punch it!”

The transport lifted, thrusters screaming. Damus fought the controls as the bay doors refused to open. “It’s a failsafe! Pressure loss—they won’t release!”

“Then we make our own exit!” Phel shouted, jumping into the weapons seat.

He fired a missile straight into the hangar doors. The explosion tore them apart, decompressing the bay in a violent rush. Nalash soldiers were sucked into space as the transport’s shields flared under the pressure.

“Skip drive ready!” Damus yelled.

“Get us out!” Tak ordered.

Damus threaded the transport through the shredded hangar doors, dodging debris and incoming fire. The Ghra’kul’s guns lit up the void, hammering their shields. Phel returned fire, blasting a fighter out of their path. “They’re locking on!”

Damus slammed the skip drive, and the stars stretched into white streaks before snapping back into the cold clarity of realspace. The transport shuddered violently as it dropped out of the jump, alarms blaring in protest.

Silence followed — a heavy, suffocating silence.

Tak stared at the empty seat beside him, the one Trepel should have been in. His throat tightened. Phel sat rigidly in the weapons chair, jaw clenched so hard it looked like it might crack. Damus’ hands trembled on the controls, smoke still rising faintly from his scorched sleeves.

“She bought us this,” Tak whispered, voice raw. “We make it count.”

But grief had no time to settle.

The moment the transport stabilized, warning lights flared red across the console.

“Multiple signatures incoming!” Damus shouted. “We’re in the crossfire — both fleets are firing!”

Outside the viewport, streaks of plasma fire crisscrossed the void. Nalash batteries hammered the space around them, and Ixanian fighters were screaming in from the flank, weapons hot and targeting anything not broadcasting a friendly code.

Phel swore. “They’re going to blow us out of the sky!”

Tak snapped out of his grief, leaning forward. “Damus — punch through their comms. Now.”

“I’m trying!” Damus’ fingers flew across the controls. “Their jamming field is thick — hold on—”

A blast rocked the transport, sending sparks flying from the ceiling.

Damus!” Tak barked.

“I know, I know!” Damus snarled, rerouting power. “Come on, you stubborn piece of—there!”

The comm screen flickered, then stabilized into a clear channel.

Tak leaned in, shouting over the alarms. “Evelna, this is Commander Le’nal Tak aboard the stolen Nalash transport — DO NOT FIRE. Repeat, DO NOT FIRE. Ixanian crew aboard. We are not hostiles!”

For a heartbeat, nothing.

Then the comm crackled, and a familiar voice cut through the chaos.

“Confirmed, Commander. Hold your course.”

Ixanian fighters streaked past the transport, blue thrusters blazing as they broke formation and peeled off to engage the Nalash ships. Two fighters slid into escort positions on either side of the transport, their pilots signaling with sharp, precise maneuvers.

“They’ve got us,” Phel breathed, relief and grief tangled in his voice.

The fighters guided them through the storm of weapons fire, weaving between bursts of plasma and debris. Ahead, the Evelna hull loomed — elegant, alive, and opening a bay door on her far side just wide enough for the battered transport to slip through.

“Steady,” Damus muttered, guiding the craft in. “Steady—”

The transport cleared the threshold, skidding slightly as it touched down inside the bay. The doors slammed shut behind them, sealing out the chaos of battle.

For the first time since Trepel fell, Tak exhaled.

They had made it.

The bay lights flickered as the Evel’na’s voice echoed through the speakers, calm and resonant despite the battle raging outside.

“All hands — prepare to phase.”

Tak closed his eyes, letting the words settle over him like a weight and a promise.

They were back on the Evelna.

But not whole.

And the war was far from over.

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